Ze can't even just be gender neutral, ze has to be adopted as well. The more marginalized zey are, the more "compelling" zheir character is, child.

22  2019-05-20 by stealthygeek

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This shit is just gobbledygook

It's a bunch of hoot-nanny.

Hoot-nanny sounds like fun. I'd rather be chained up in Big As funhouse than read anything this fat unoriginal hack wrote

If I were a middle school English teacher and a student handed in that schlock, I’d suggest the student kill itself.

I'd tell them all to kill themselves, but I'd provide material assistance for this one.

I like how all the alien races are basically psychologically human despite being from different galaxies and of radically different appearance

He has no imagination. How about a alien species that is hermaphroditic or can change sexes. Or maybe a species that initially had two sexes but maybe the females can reproduce through parthenogenesis and over time females ended up massively outnumbering males, maybe even to the point that no male members of the species exist. But then you would actually have to use your imagination to think of how a society like that would differ from our own.

So woke. I bet the pink haired 300 pound bull dykes and Antifa are lining up to buy this horse shit.

This is lame even for Patrick. He’s trying to win all the woke points.

He's gone from ripping off Douglas Adams to ripping off a mentally ill tumblr tranny.

What a faggot.

He's just ripping off the Hermat species from Peter David's Star Trek New Frontier books.

I was a late bloomer.

Pat thinks shoehorning this shit into his books is making the world a better place. The arrogance is unbelievable.

what do zou know about zeither struggle, bigot (no offence to bi zeoples)?

I bet even transwhateverthefucks think this is garbage, too. Pandering horseshit.

Remember: Trans are mentally ill

Are they really that compelling, you plump dunce?

So they still have sexes, genders and stereotypical gender roles? The only difference is just that they use gender neutral pronouns. What a surface level writing fucking idiot

Zit's zrue. Zatrick Zomlinson zis za zalented zauthor, zhild.

u/patrickstomlinson this is fucking SHIT writing. Absolute fucking shit.

I should have clarified, this text is actually from a review of Children of the Divide(d ass cheeks). But all this gender identity shit is in his book though, obviously.

Patrick's writing is such fucking shit I couldn't tell the difference at all.

this is just making me imagine a narrator with a cartoonish german accent

Are these niggas just mocking German people's accent?