I'm writing a pilot for a new cop drama I was wondering if I can get you guys' opinion on it??????????

1  2019-01-17 by goldstandard32

The show follows the life of Detective Button Fox and his partner Some Black Guy who are assigned to the Los Angeles beat and get entangled with the Hollywood and tech elite. Detective Fox must decide if he's on the side of the law or whether he wants to accept bribes from the elitists and live in luxury. What do you think?

19 comments

1  423289 2019-01-17

Write a suicide note instead.

1  goldstandard32 2019-01-17

I'll get right on it

1  liljoeyk 2019-01-17

It's kinda like Sliders?

1  Ant_Sucks 2019-01-17

Whichever gets us to the gay sex first.

1  blue_magoo_62 2019-01-17

Can some black guy die in the first five minutes and is never mentioned again?

1  goldstandard32 2019-01-17

I'm not looking for co-writers alright, this is big boy stuff, I just need opinions.

1  JimandFred 2019-01-17

starring Mel Gibson and Eric Andre?

1  Greeced_Lightning 2019-01-17

Detective Some Black Guy should commit a rape at least once per episode

1  NguyenLevin71 2019-01-17

Says the resident faggot...

1  JohnDough911 2019-01-17

I didn’t read your post and I want you to die.

1  AnthonysGunFauxPas 2019-01-17

What about a contract killer hired to kill people’s dogs? Maybe the neighbors don’t like it barking, the dad doesn’t like the dog etc etc (tons of scenarios). And it’s called “The Dogsassin”.

1  BlueBash 2019-01-17

That reminds me of this: http://www.cc.com/video-clips/fqvfm3/reno-911--putting--em-down

1  literalotherkin 2019-01-17

You stole that!

1  AnthonysGunFauxPas 2019-01-17

Point out where? Parallel thinking? I was walking my dog buzzed on a few different substances and thought of this weeks ago.

1  literalotherkin 2019-01-17

It's nearly word for word an episode of Seinfeld. Elaine can't sleep sho she hires a dog assassin to take care of the problem. Turns out it's Newman and he does it regularly.

1  AnthonysGunFauxPas 2019-01-17

Ah fuck I remember that one I’m a faggg. Good thing I’m not a content creator and just retarded.

1  literalotherkin 2019-01-17

I thought you were doing a that whole Ant/Seinfeld story bit. You should pitch it to the guy who played Newman as a spin off series. He doesn't seem to be doing much these days.

1  AnthonysGunFauxPas 2019-01-17

No but I almost pulled a Jim and was going to act like I had never seen Seinfeld

1  BarryMcCaulkener 2019-01-17

I was staying at a hotel earlier this week and watching the trash TV in my room and there is a new show on the Hallmark channel or whatever the one is that plays old Perry Mason shows where the main character lady's name is Ruby Herring. Like red herring. Get it?

Long story short, I think you've got a fighting chance in the TV world, my friend. You seem like you'd fit right in.

1  AnthonysGunFauxPas 2019-01-17

Point out where? Parallel thinking? I was walking my dog buzzed on a few different substances and thought of this weeks ago.