Song I wrote about Jim

42  2018-08-31 by throwawayoanda2017

10 comments

Cool

Pretty good but you're missing a syllable in line 3 and it ruins the entire experience. I don't feel immersed.

glad you pointed that out, I thought my brain was skipping again.

ok terrific

You should've written that with a shot gun hat that has a toe trigger made of marmalade.....

AIDS

With an AIDS hat, you mean

ME: Do you have a name for your marmalade?

Dis guyz gud

and thats how you executive produce!

Check out Dylan over here.