O&A+J Fan Fic: "I made a mistake."
18 2016-03-15 by [deleted]
Lying awake staring at the ceiling for yet another hour, the balding radio jock’s mind wanders again to a better time when the world knew him as a funny host. “I made a mistake. I made a mistake,” he moans aloud to a man - an equal - he can now only see in his dreams. Meanwhile, a swarthy misogynist drifts into an alcohol stupor while bathed in the television’s glow; he too slurs those words: “I made a mistake. I made a mistake.” Across the country, an emaciated, middle-aged man walks off the stage to the waning din of polite applause. As his star fades, sleep will again become a stranger when, with a mouth full of shame, he mutters to himself, “I made a mistake. I made a mistake.” Then, like the distant whistle of an oncoming train, echoes faintly ... "you know what, dude?"
To be continued.
9 comments
17 MrKrinkel 2016-03-15
That's some cool shit. I was all like "man, what happens next!" and you hit it with the "to be continued" tag? I know what me and the homies are reading tonight dog
10 KDkid18 2016-03-15
What's that sound? Oh, it's your option contract being printed by our lawyers. You Sir are going to be a star.
9 bonecrushingkisses 2016-03-15
I hope part 2 comes soon. I can't edge all night.
6 [deleted] 2016-03-15
Part Two:
Another man's child. A healing bruise. An unpaid tranny whore. These fragments of the past stand out like gin blossoms on the white parchment of a wino's face. Fond memories of better times surface as if silt atop roiling waters when Ronnie B. speaks to me. Never more, boys, never more.
1 avpersonapd 2016-03-15
Solid cut, Rey Ordonez.
1 Really_Big_Dummy 2016-03-15
YOu're a good writer, it's so realistic. Soon this sub will just be commenting on and making photoshop posts about your imaginary characters.
1 Clamdilicus 2016-03-15
Alternate ending?
1 ShadowbannedKeithM 2016-03-15
Good writing
1 AnudderCast 2016-03-15
Does this story end with Ant being spit roasted by two trannies? Because that's how it should end.