I was all in with the bit cus he’s an annoying faggot who fans the flames but that is seriously dog shit writing. Naming the character “first” has to be extremely confusing for the reader, it was in these two paragraphs. “He was also young.” Lmao this is honestly terrible
This should be the new bit, guys. Post random excerpts from Patso's books and let people just fucking eviscerate his shitty writing style. Then we'll show him later.
22 comments
1 Twatsmash 2019-09-11
Seeing regular people mocking Fat’s lack of talent/ugly, fat, faggot face is my new favorite thing.
1 OnArefugee 2019-09-11
Cue Pat showing up to call them all lying nazi incels.
1 AnthonyCumia_LGBT 2019-09-11
He really is a dog shit level writer.
1 OutlawMemer 2019-09-11
He really is an inspiration. If you're a writer and you doubt your abilities or talent, just remember that this subpar child-abuser got published.
1 Ant_Sucks 2019-09-11
Are there any more subreddits for making fun of shitty writers?
1 SwaG-JuGGalO-YoLO69 2019-09-11
I was all in with the bit cus he’s an annoying faggot who fans the flames but that is seriously dog shit writing. Naming the character “first” has to be extremely confusing for the reader, it was in these two paragraphs. “He was also young.” Lmao this is honestly terrible
1 The-Cumia-Prance 2019-09-11
"thrusting her bottom" is something many heterosexual men would write, child
1 Mikekekeke 2019-09-11
Where this at, y'all?
1 jockiboi 2019-09-11
Thank you for your service, on this blessed day
1 Baracklyn_Cyclonez 2019-09-11
He couldn’t think of another word besides first?
1 yevyoyevyo 2019-09-11
It's the name of the character, honey. Her name is First name Last nane. It's what we call comedy, child.
1 WindCityWelterweight 2019-09-11
It's the same cleverness that earned him the 'Pulitzer Pat' moniker.
1 WindCityWelterweight 2019-09-11
And don't get me started on alt names of real people. Fonald Plump!?!??! Hahahha ingenious!
1 Mintwa 2019-09-11
Holy shit they are destroying him.
1 notasodomite 2019-09-11
This reads like a kid's romance novel.
1 WindCityWelterweight 2019-09-11
Excellent work 👌👌👌
1 2th_repair 2019-09-11
Here’s the link.
https://www.reddit.com/r/menwritingwomen/comments/d2nvss/first_is_a_womansooo/
1 2th_repair 2019-09-11
Outlawmemer ribs hurting
1 OutlawMemer 2019-09-11
I got a nigga's?
1 fatprick_s_tomlinson 2019-09-11
This should be the new bit, guys. Post random excerpts from Patso's books and let people just fucking eviscerate his shitty writing style. Then we'll show him later.
1 IGotATreeOnMyHouse85 2019-09-11
He’s all around awkward person.
1 IAmNotFatChild 2019-09-11
http://archive.li/wxFkd